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The sensation of the mattress shifting beneath her pulled her from sleep, bubblegum eyes fluttering open just as his heavy frame sunk against her, his bare chest warm against her exposed back. Thick arms snaked around her waist, the rough skin of his large hands snagging the silk of her nightgown as he layered them over her stomach. She smiled broadly, plush lips stretching from ear to ear as he placed his stubble-laced cheek against hers, exhaling in a soft cloud of liquor vapor. He kissed the corner of her mouth awkwardly with his own, and smiled broadly to himself, sighing with an enthralled flourish while he tucked his knees into the back of her legs.

“I lo’ y’, kit’n.” He moaned softly into her ear, desperate affection alight in his voice. His grasp tightened on her, hands tracing her ribs and the lines of her chest, before grasping her by the shoulders in desperation, pinning him to her warmly and in need. She leaned into him soothingly; basking in the sensation of his elbow nestled into the crook of her hip, and wished they could be closer still.
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Author's Comments

My funny Valentine,
Sweet, comic Valentine,
You make me smile with my heart.
Your looks are laughable--
Unphotographable--
Yet you're my favorite work of art.

Is your figure less than greek?
Is your mouth a little weak?
When you open it to speak,
Are you smart?

But don't change a hair for me.
Not if you care for me.
Stay, little Valentine, stay.
Each day is Valentine's Day.

Is your figure less than greek?
Is your mouth a little weak?
When you open it to speak,
Are you smart?

But don't change a hair for me.
Not if you care for me.
Stay, little Valentine, stay.
Each day is Valentine's Day.

- Frank Sinatra

Kit copyright =FreakishFeline.
Doc copyright =DemonRei.

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The emotion put into this piece is amazing. I love the words you used and...blah. It's just epic.


Great job.

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:heart: Just tell me you love me, they're the only words I need to hear. :heart:

Iz been claimed by Taku-Sama. She has the dibs.
:icondemonrei:
You write Doc better than I do and I love you for it.

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To, Too, Two.
You, Your, You're.
Their, There, They're.

IT'S NOT THAT HARD. LEARN IT.
:stormtrooper:
:iconfreakishfeline:
Doooouuuuuubt~

But thank you. C:


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I'm a neutrois; I am not an androgyne. Please respect the difference.
I prefer Ey (he/she), Em (him/her), Eir (his/her), Eirs (his/hers), and Emself (himself/herself).
:iconoheix:
This text is really sweet. It warmed up my heart c: Your texts have such a soothing power ...
:iconfreakishfeline:
D'aw, thank you~

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I'm a neutrois; I am not an androgyne. Please respect the difference.
I prefer Ey (he/she), Em (him/her), Eir (his/her), Eirs (his/hers), and Emself (himself/herself).
:iconxlessordinaryx:
You're amazing and I'm about to go to bed but only concern; 'stubble' instead o' 'stumble' when describing his chin. My half-asleep brain managed to catch that.
:iconfreakishfeline:
Nice catch!
I'll fix that today or tomorrow~


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I'm a neutrois; I am not an androgyne. Please respect the difference.
I prefer Ey (he/she), Em (him/her), Eir (his/her), Eirs (his/hers), and Emself (himself/herself).
:iconxlessordinaryx:
No problem. XD Better me then some anal-retentive bitch, right?

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